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| + | '''Example of a GOOD description (legal)''' | ||
| − | + | He looks rather malnourished, his body being lithe and lanky. His deathly pale skin almost | |
| − | + | glows translucently when light strikes his body just so. Standing at only a little over five feet | |
| + | his small form hangs almost lethargically. His eyes are like two large red dark pools of blood, | ||
| − | + | leaving little space for the whites to show, and are accented by his dark sunken sockets. | |
| − | + | His shoulder-length black hair is straight and wispy further adding to his deathly presence, | |
| − | + | and yet adds a hint of unhinged wildness. His movements are small and calculated, with the | |
| − | + | grace of a specter. | |
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| − | + | Not ONLY do you know what he looks like, but you know with great detail, and also giving you | |
| − | + | insight on how he is perceived to carry himself. Remember, adverbs are only legal when used | |
| − | + | correctly. He obviously looks very unhealthy, and hardly pleasant looking. | |
| − | + | (This description was written by Tocharaeh, for Estidn, both parties are proud of it) | |
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| − | + | '''Writing a desc''': | |
| + | 1) What colour would your like your eyes to be? | ||
| − | + | 2) Body type: Thin, lanky, athletic, muscular, overweight, unhealthy? | |
| − | See also: [[ | + | 3) Hair colour, and length? |
| + | :Style of hair? | ||
| + | 4) Tattoos, or other markings? | ||
| + | :Locations? Make sure they're "visible". | ||
| + | 5) Skin pigmentation? Glory of 4D is that you can be whatever you want (within reason). | ||
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| + | 7) Your favorite colours? Why not personalize some more and add some colour to things? | ||
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| + | 8) Temperament? To you always look angry? Depressed? Or purky a Kender. Please god no.. | ||
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| + | See also: [[RPBACKGROUND]] [[ROLEPLAY]] [[RPDESCRIPTIONS]] [[RPRULES]] | ||
Latest revision as of 15:28, 13 July 2017
RPDESC2
Example of a GOOD description (legal)
He looks rather malnourished, his body being lithe and lanky. His deathly pale skin almost
glows translucently when light strikes his body just so. Standing at only a little over five feet
his small form hangs almost lethargically. His eyes are like two large red dark pools of blood,
leaving little space for the whites to show, and are accented by his dark sunken sockets.
His shoulder-length black hair is straight and wispy further adding to his deathly presence,
and yet adds a hint of unhinged wildness. His movements are small and calculated, with the
grace of a specter.
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Not ONLY do you know what he looks like, but you know with great detail, and also giving you
insight on how he is perceived to carry himself. Remember, adverbs are only legal when used
correctly. He obviously looks very unhealthy, and hardly pleasant looking.
(This description was written by Tocharaeh, for Estidn, both parties are proud of it)
Writing a desc:
1) What colour would your like your eyes to be?
2) Body type: Thin, lanky, athletic, muscular, overweight, unhealthy?
3) Hair colour, and length?
- Style of hair?
4) Tattoos, or other markings?
- Locations? Make sure they're "visible".
5) Skin pigmentation? Glory of 4D is that you can be whatever you want (within reason).
7) Your favorite colours? Why not personalize some more and add some colour to things?
8) Temperament? To you always look angry? Depressed? Or purky a Kender. Please god no..
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See also: RPBACKGROUND ROLEPLAY RPDESCRIPTIONS RPRULES
